Comments on: rhetoric and numbers in various workplace settings http://courses.johnmjones.org/ENGL605/2012/11/04/rhetoric-and-numbers-in-various-workplace-settings/ ENGL 605, WVU, Fall 2012 Wed, 14 Nov 2012 02:44:42 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.4 By: Jillian Swisher http://courses.johnmjones.org/ENGL605/2012/11/04/rhetoric-and-numbers-in-various-workplace-settings/#comment-3870 Jillian Swisher Sat, 10 Nov 2012 03:12:29 +0000 http://courses.johnmjones.org/ENGL605/?p=991#comment-3870 You raise some interesting points, Will! I think the composition of data is more heavily influenced by the rhetorical situation than we may think. Just like Nelson uses the rhetorical situation of writing to influence his decisions of arrangement, tone, style, genre, etc, I can imagine that a good technical communicator would similarly use the rhetorical situation to influence decisions in the arrangement and presentation of data. For example, in his article entitled "The Cognitive Style of PowerPoint: Pitching Out Corrupts Within" (one of the readings from last week), Tufte explains that it would have been absolutely ridiculous to present data about survival rates of various cancers in graph after graph after graph. He says, "<em>Everything</em> is wrong with these smarmy, incoherent graphs: uncomparative, thin data-density, chartjunk, encoded legends, meaningless color, logotype branding, indifference to content and evidence. . . The best way to show the cancer data is the original table with its good comparative structure and reporting of standard errors" (20-22). Although Tufte uses this example to demonstrate the shortcomings of PowerPoint, he indirectly touches upon the attention to the rhetorical situation that is necessary to effectively arrange this data on cancer: datum must easily be compared to other datum, color shouldn't detract the viewer's attention from the numbers, etc. Maybe if we think of data as being just as influenced by the rhetorical situation as written communication, we'll be less intimidated to arrange and present graphs, tables, charts, etc. You raise some interesting points, Will! I think the composition of data is more heavily influenced by the rhetorical situation than we may think. Just like Nelson uses the rhetorical situation of writing to influence his decisions of arrangement, tone, style, genre, etc, I can imagine that a good technical communicator would similarly use the rhetorical situation to influence decisions in the arrangement and presentation of data.

For example, in his article entitled “The Cognitive Style of PowerPoint: Pitching Out Corrupts Within” (one of the readings from last week), Tufte explains that it would have been absolutely ridiculous to present data about survival rates of various cancers in graph after graph after graph. He says, “Everything is wrong with these smarmy, incoherent graphs: uncomparative, thin data-density, chartjunk, encoded legends, meaningless color, logotype branding, indifference to content and evidence. . . The best way to show the cancer data is the original table with its good comparative structure and reporting of standard errors” (20-22). Although Tufte uses this example to demonstrate the shortcomings of PowerPoint, he indirectly touches upon the attention to the rhetorical situation that is necessary to effectively arrange this data on cancer: datum must easily be compared to other datum, color shouldn’t detract the viewer’s attention from the numbers, etc. Maybe if we think of data as being just as influenced by the rhetorical situation as written communication, we’ll be less intimidated to arrange and present graphs, tables, charts, etc.

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By: John http://courses.johnmjones.org/ENGL605/2012/11/04/rhetoric-and-numbers-in-various-workplace-settings/#comment-3451 John Tue, 06 Nov 2012 14:30:34 +0000 http://courses.johnmjones.org/ENGL605/?p=991#comment-3451 Good questions. I wonder if this kind of data-thinking is more related to visual thinking, than to verbal. Good questions. I wonder if this kind of data-thinking is more related to visual thinking, than to verbal.

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